19-02-2024 12:28 PM
19-02-2024 12:28 PM
Thanks @PizzaMondo !
19-02-2024 01:13 PM
19-02-2024 01:13 PM
Lovely tribute to your departing group facilitator @StuF 👍
19-02-2024 01:23 PM
19-02-2024 01:23 PM
Thanks! She liked it
19-02-2024 06:05 PM
19-02-2024 06:05 PM
Yay. I wondered how long or what would lure my good friend @StuF here. I always love your poems Stuf. Good to see you in this old motel. Full of ghosts, shadows and apparitions.
Perfect place to pen a dream. I'll have the porter carry up your bags.. tonys..
19-02-2024 06:26 PM
19-02-2024 06:26 PM
@creative_writer some how I missed that little line of yours about missing the young girl but she was
easier to shatter. It left an exit wound on me. Trust me. It more than qualifies as poetry. tonys..
19-02-2024 06:34 PM
19-02-2024 06:34 PM
19-02-2024 07:37 PM
19-02-2024 07:37 PM
Thanks @tonys
There's another in the works...but how long for that we will have to wait and see! lol
19-02-2024 07:38 PM
19-02-2024 07:38 PM
19-02-2024 09:30 PM
19-02-2024 09:30 PM
Nice to hear @StuF Look forward .. I have em all over my walls. Trying hard to show restraint. Many not suitable for this place. Tempering brutality with an edit doesnt feel quite right. I actually prefer short story writing.
. Poems are still a new tetter on the edge of an event horizon for me. There's more than a few I nearly did not come back from. . . I'll leave the foyer light on for you Stuf. . your friend. tonys..
19-02-2024 10:05 PM
19-02-2024 10:05 PM
@tonysI somehow missed you responded to me! My poem was actually about empathising with frankenstein's monster lol, and about looking normal but being fundamentally broken inside. I think the monster was actually meant to be quite beautiful physically? Or I just misread it, it has been a while also. OK my poem is probably pretty opaque, I like your interpretation, you remind me of one of my friends who always thinks in ways I don't expect.
Looking forward to reading more poetry here, I have a couple more poems that survived the years I might trot the poor things out later.
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